Persuasive Writing

Personal opinion:

I personally think that having a tuck shop at Panmure Bridge School is a very smart move for this school. There are many reason’s why and I am sure many people will agree with me.  

Income:

There are many notebooks that get damaged and it sets students back in learning. Most children do not have the funds to pay for the repair. If the school opens a tuck shop the school could maybe help with %20 of the money. We can do this by selling food a little more expensive. Also students can’t pay for camp or any other trip. The school could pay some of the money.

Health:

New Zealand is one of the most obese countries. Mainly because families buy cheap junk food for children. Also because Jolly drinks are really cheap and they are as bad as battery acid. We could make salads or healthy burgers that could be at a cheap price. This will persuade the children to buy healthy food.  

Convenience:

Sometimes children are late to school because they went to buy lunch. Which is not safe because of traffic in the mornings. Also their money can be stolen. Also if there is nothing at home to eat they can just get a few dollars and get some proper healthy food.

Conclusion:

Tuck Shops are way easier because of the convenience, health and the income the school will get for students and also sport equipment.