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Thursday 28 May 2015

Persuasive Writing

Personal opinion:
I personally think that having a tuck shop at Panmure Bridge School is a very smart move for this school. There are many reason’s why and I am sure many people will agree with me.  


Income:
There are many notebooks that get damaged and it sets students back in learning. Most children do not have the funds to pay for the repair. If the school opens a tuck shop the school could maybe help with %20 of the money. We can do this by selling food a little more expensive. Also students can’t pay for camp or any other trip. The school could pay some of the money.


Health:
New Zealand is one of the most obese countries. Mainly because families buy cheap junk food for children. Also because Jolly drinks are really cheap and they are as bad as battery acid. We could make salads or healthy burgers that could be at a cheap price. This will persuade the children to buy healthy food.  


Convenience:
Sometimes children are late to school because they went to buy lunch. Which is not safe because of traffic in the mornings. Also their money can be stolen. Also if there is nothing at home to eat they can just get a few dollars and get some proper healthy food.


Conclusion:
Tuck Shops are way easier because of the convenience, health and the income the school will get for students and also sport equipment.

The hungry wave Character Analysis

Here is my character analysis on a boy named Mafui'e. This google draw explains what type of person he is.

Friday 22 May 2015

Kids Can trip to Rangitoto

Here is my photo collage of the trip to Rangitoto. These are some of the things I found interesting like the volcanic rocks. The view was amazing and I had a great time. Thanks Kids Can for organizing the trip.

Blog Comments



Here are my blog comments. I have commeted on two people from our school and one person from another

Thursday 21 May 2015

Problem Solving


For this problem solving activity we had to make 100 using the numbers 1 2 3 4 5  6 7 8 9.

Monday 18 May 2015

100 Grid

For problem solving we had to look for a pattern to make this puzzle fit in the box.


Friday 15 May 2015

Hunua Falls

Here is my information about Hunua Falls and where it is located.

Wednesday 6 May 2015

Kiwi Can Poem

I am Joshua
I wonder about the future
I see trees
I hear voices
I am Joshua
I feel the wind blowing