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Tuesday 29 April 2014

Holiday Reading - Rewrite the ending


The title of the book I read was Conspiracy 365. The author of this book is Gabrielle Lord. This book is an action book.

The book originally ended with Cal’s little sister getting kidnapped. Soon Cal found out that he was the nephew of one of the kidnappers. Through his uncle they were sending messages to each other. They said that they will give him back his sister if he could answer a riddle. Once he lost the riddle he lost his sister’s life along with it.

I would of changed the ending with Cal giving something to the kidnappers for his sister  instead of answering a riddle.

My writing is better than the original because it doesn’t take too much time.

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