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Tuesday 29 April 2014

Holiday Reading - Rewrite the ending


The title of the book I read was Conspiracy 365. The author of this book is Gabrielle Lord. This book is an action book.

The book originally ended with Cal’s little sister getting kidnapped. Soon Cal found out that he was the nephew of one of the kidnappers. Through his uncle they were sending messages to each other. They said that they will give him back his sister if he could answer a riddle. Once he lost the riddle he lost his sister’s life along with it.

I would of changed the ending with Cal giving something to the kidnappers for his sister  instead of answering a riddle.

My writing is better than the original because it doesn’t take too much time.

Thursday 17 April 2014

Easter Egg Hunt

On Wednesday we had a Easter egg hunt with Rm1 and Rm1 enjoyed it

Tuesday 15 April 2014

Identity Dance Crew

Thank you to the Identity dance group for coming to our school and performing an amazing dance.

Tuesday 8 April 2014

XtraMath

Here is my XtraMath results as you can see I am nearly on Division

Poetry Presentation

This is me and Halatoa's voice thread we are reciting a poem called Brians nose by Gareth Lancaster.

Wednesday 2 April 2014

Poetry Evaluation

Were you pleased with how you sounded?
 I am pleased on how I sounded because I spoke clearly.

What helped you learn your poem?
I practised it and it was also short.

Did you look at your audience?
Yes, I looked at my audience.

Did you speak clearly?
Yes, I did speak clearly.
Did you use an expressive voice?
No, I didn’t use an expressive voice.

What are your next steps?
 My next steps are expression.

Here is my poem I recited.
It is called man from the moon
by Gareth Lancaster.